Hidden Under a Name

posted December 17th, 2017, 12:00 am


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December 17th, 2017, 12:00 am

Midnight-fox18

This poem is way shorter okay

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You say it’s a game
And it grows in fame
But it is just pain
Hidden under a name
What is there to gain
When you’re passing the chain?
Where is your shame
For the victims you’ve slain?
Were they really to blame
For the wound in your brain?
Borderline sane
Unable to tame
You now take aim
How you fight the rain
Is simply to maim
Unstoppable train
Spreading the stain
Please can you refrain
From igniting the flame?
Our world cannot sustain
The cruelty of its reign!
You say it’s a game
And it grows in fame
But it is just pain
Hidden under a name

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December 18th, 2017, 12:10 pm

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December 17th, 2017, 9:36 am

Midnight-fox18

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@Luna_the_absol:3: Yeah sorry, it’s meant to be that way since it’s a poem in my author’s comment ^^”
@WiispNightmare: What no Wiisp you’re even more amazing than me, don’t say these things about yourself :’3
@HollyTheFluffyCat: Thanks! X3

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December 17th, 2017, 5:48 am

Luna_the_absol:3

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There's nothing there

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December 17th, 2017, 8:10 am

WiispNightmare

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Wellp okay bye I'm leaving Mid you can be people's inspiration now

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December 17th, 2017, 8:22 am

HollyTheFluffyCat

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this is amazing hhhhhh

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December 17th, 2017, 10:17 am

WildfireK

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The repition from the beginning to end what I couldn't do that!! :00
Also the rhyming holy crud that's amazing even when I write raps I can't dish out that many XD

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December 17th, 2017, 11:47 am

WiispNightmare

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@Midnight-fox18: pfffshhhttttt no way
Even at the point I am at now I don't even compare to your level

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